come mock me (I will)
mock me with your smile,
your eyes and fake generosity. (jealous?)
come tease me (I will)
tease me with your photo,
your hairdo and popularity. (I'm fabulous!)
people need people like you
to know the evils
and they also need you
to love themselves more and
shield themselves from your
smile, hairdo, (jealous?)
eyes, and photo. (I'm famous!)
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today when I was checking out my DA messages, I saw someone put me in their watchlist, which is kind of rare so I have to know a bit more about this stranger. After a few seconds' trip, I came to realize it's all just a fraud!
This young lady only has 2 deviations, one is a rather poor drawing, and another one, which is also her DD ID, is a very large pic of her, with a pair of rather big eyes, thin pink lips and long blond hairdo. She has been a member for about 10 months, but got more than 20,000 page views, and tons of tons of comments at the right column, each stating that how glad they are for being added in watchlist , but none of which has been answered. i blocked this one immediately, I had to 'cause nothing disgusts me more than pretension, lies and frauds. People like them do nothing but harms to a creative communities like this, and what's worse is that they even flatter themselves for being so smart and highly admired and praised by their ill behavior. |
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The new fad instead of favoring everything is merely adding a piece of your work to their collections. All it does is remind me once again how anonymous and depreciating all this can be here. When someone writes a short story or a poem and its added mere seconds afterwards to some collection seems so rude to me.
To be honest I don't fully understand your poem or its connection to what you wrote there. But I do like your repition about the hairdo. I keep imagining that someone with a cosmic looking hairdo with lightning bolts shooting out of the follicles has somehow pissed you off.
You said you don't fully understand my writing and its connection... well, first of all, I want this verse to be sarcastic, in a very obvious way of course, then I try to draw a picture based on my impression of her picture. Some visual elements like smile and eyes or even hairdo of a woman, in my opinion, easily lead to vanity or pretension, and that's why I use those key words (rhyme). To make my monologue more hilarious, I also bring the imagined words of the girl (like "jealous?", etc.), so it turns out more like a dialogue.
I haven't written verses lately so the rhyme is a bit awkward. Such as
me - generosity - popularity
you - hairdo - photo
know - love
people - more
will- smile - evil - selves - shield
I just do my best!
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